by alexc » Thu Jul 31, 2008 6:01 pm
So the first thing is to use 27 Year Old, lose the hyphen and the s on the end of Years. You would like to come across as though you are intelligent, and that simple typo could cost you visitors who will think that you couldn't even type the headline without screwing it up. I'm bot trying to be rude or anything, so don't be offended, I'm just point that out.
Also, adding you career and a catch as to what the product is will help, but try to be concise.
"Discover How a 27 Year Old Wrestler Made $1.3 Million Dollars In One Month With This Easy To Use System"
Make sure you include the word Million in there as it will catch more attention.