Website Review: Need your help, please.

[AceVitality]

Hi,

My name is Ed Stutzman and I am the webmaster for this site. Our group is a collection of home-based business builders all marketing for the same company. Even though we all get a free site to use from the company we have built this site so that we can focus more on product sales rather than "the business". We do have a business opportunity section but are not trying to rub our prospects nose in it. Over 90% of our customers are just that, customers, the remaining folks are actively building a business.

The main URL is:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.html

For online advertising, we would send a product visitor to this URL:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.h ... a_vitality

For additional online advertising, we would send opportunity visitors to this URL:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.html#SLM

I would appreciate any and all feedback as we are all working together to build the best site we can to market our businessess.

Thanks,

Ed

[Mitch]

[AceVitality]

It is the same page, but by using the # anchor reference we are able to direct visitors to certain areas of the page. Thanks for checking the site out.

[painternc]

I really dislike the font and the copy GBG 10 in one - I was immediately confused - what is GBG - what is 10 in one.
How about opening with bold questions:
Are you tired of feeling fun-down and stressed?
Do you want super food benefits without super food price?
Anyway - I think open with questions - but good ones - work on your copy - and then after the questions -
10 in one will and then list the benefits.