Sales Copy Review

[dshipe]

Hello,
I am about to launch a new website and was hoping to get some help with the sales copy. If you have any suggestions for improving the copy I'd love to hear them.

http://www.scriptcalendar.com/popup/default.asp

[kidino]

[edman]

Remove the google ads on the page, it's kind of distracting

Also

Put these in separate lines to allow people see it better.

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Do you use standard popup windows on your website? Are you losing money because your popups are getting blocked? Would you like to know how to instantly convert your standard popups to DHTML popups that cannot be blocked?
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Also try to break up the page a bit better so people can see the page in bits instead of as a whole, which makes it difficult to read

Cheers

[Kirk]

I agree that you need to kill the Google ads - I was just looking at your page and there were two other ads for popup generators just like yours - probably not good for business...

Your letter is very short and really only targeted to folks who are already using JS pop-ups. I think a longer letter might rope in some non-popup users too if you can make it compelling.

If you added some bonuses, I think that would help...you're kinda late to the DHTML pop-up party, so you may need to spice up your offer a bit to stand out from your competition.

Reading over your FAQs, it looks a bit complicated. Maybe a Camtasia video showing folks how easy it is to install would make it less intimidating...

Just my .02