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Please Review Sales Page

Postby laurie » Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:44 am

Hi all,

Lynn suggested I post this page for your review. Please let me know your thoughts.

http://www.christianhomebusinessconnect ... neurs.html

I look forward to your feedback!
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Postby lisamariemary » Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:41 pm

Your page is looking really good, Laurie!

I noticed three things - I don't really like the 'Home' link up at the top and also don't really like the purple font.

And I think maybe you should *jazz up* the 'buy now' button - especially since it is an expensive product
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Postby lisamariemary » Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:44 pm

And I'm so sorry I'm only giving the 'I don't like' constructive criticism - I'm not feeling well and I can't 'totally' think straight
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Please Review Sales Page

Postby laurie » Thu Jun 18, 2009 3:41 pm

Lisa Marie,

Thanks for your input, and that's what I need - constructive criticism. Sorry you're not feeling well - hope you're better soon. :)

You know you are mentioning the things I wasn't too crazy about either, but now it's confirmed, so I"ll change them. I wasn't sure what to do about the home link - so you think I should take it off altogether and just let them click on the header to get back?

Thanks for the input.
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Postby lisamariemary » Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:04 pm

Home link - gone. Definitely

And as this is a sales page...I'm not sure you're going to want the header to link back, either. You want your whole focus to be on the BUY button, you know?

(Thanks for understanding....I am actually starting to feel better. Yea!)
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Please Review Sales Page

Postby laurie » Thu Jun 18, 2009 9:36 pm

Lisa Marie,

I have made the changes if you'd like to take another look.

http://www.christianhomebusinessconnect ... neurs.html
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