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Please Review My New Site

Postby doc333 » Tue Feb 03, 2009 12:49 am

Hi,
Can you please take a look and advise what jumps out at you, good or bad?
Thanks

http://www.web-traffic-revenues.com
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Postby tknoppe » Fri Feb 27, 2009 9:03 pm

To be honest David, I'm not a fan of squeeze sales pages, and that's what this really is. It's a ton of vertical scrolling.

That said, you need some padding on the left and right margins as your text is too close to the borders.

Also, I would put a call to action button that would either jump them straight down to the point on the page to order (so they won't have to do all that scrolling) or add several buy-now buttons all along for those who are already convinced and just want to buy! Make it uber easy for them. ;)

Other than that, the graphics, color scheme and such are very nice and appealing. :)
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Postby doc333 » Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:14 am

tknoppe wrote:To be honest David, I'm not a fan of squeeze sales pages, and that's what this really is. It's a ton of vertical scrolling.

That said, you need some padding on the left and right margins as your text is too close to the borders.

Also, I would put a call to action button that would either jump them straight down to the point on the page to order (so they won't have to do all that scrolling) or add several buy-now buttons all along for those who are already convinced and just want to buy! Make it uber easy for them. ;)

Other than that, the graphics, color scheme and such are very nice and appealing. :)


tknoppe,
Thanks for your advise. I will look into changing the padding and putting another couple of order links higher up
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