SSWT Internet Marketing Forum

Hi,

My name is Ed Stutzman and I am the webmaster for this site. Our group is a collection of home-based business builders all marketing for the same company. Even though we all get a free site to use from the company we have built this site so that we can focus more on product sales rather than "the business". We do have a business opportunity section but are not trying to rub our prospects nose in it. Over 90% of our customers are just that, customers, the remaining folks are actively building a business.

The main URL is:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.html

For online advertising, we would send a product visitor to this URL:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.h ... a_vitality

For additional online advertising, we would send opportunity visitors to this URL:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.html#SLM

I would appreciate any and all feedback as we are all working together to build the best site we can to market our businessess.

Thanks,

Ed

It is the same page, but by using the # anchor reference we are able to direct visitors to certain areas of the page. Thanks for checking the site out.

I really dislike the font and the copy GBG 10 in one - I was immediately confused - what is GBG - what is 10 in one.
How about opening with bold questions:
Are you tired of feeling fun-down and stressed?
Do you want super food benefits without super food price?
Anyway - I think open with questions - but good ones - work on your copy - and then after the questions -
10 in one will and then list the benefits.