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Website Review: Need your help, please.

Postby AceVitality » Wed Oct 01, 2008 12:22 pm

Hi,

My name is Ed Stutzman and I am the webmaster for this site. Our group is a collection of home-based business builders all marketing for the same company. Even though we all get a free site to use from the company we have built this site so that we can focus more on product sales rather than "the business". We do have a business opportunity section but are not trying to rub our prospects nose in it. Over 90% of our customers are just that, customers, the remaining folks are actively building a business.

The main URL is:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.html

For online advertising, we would send a product visitor to this URL:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.h ... a_vitality

For additional online advertising, we would send opportunity visitors to this URL:

http://www.gbgvitality.com/ekstutzman.html#SLM

I would appreciate any and all feedback as we are all working together to build the best site we can to market our businessess.

Thanks,

Ed
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Postby Mitch » Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:55 am

I'll just say that I don't get it. All the pages look exactly the same, so what does it matter? Nope, I'm missing the intent here.
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You're right...

Postby AceVitality » Fri Oct 24, 2008 9:59 pm

It is the same page, but by using the # anchor reference we are able to direct visitors to certain areas of the page. Thanks for checking the site out.
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Postby painternc » Thu Oct 30, 2008 7:57 pm

I really dislike the font and the copy GBG 10 in one - I was immediately confused - what is GBG - what is 10 in one.
How about opening with bold questions:
Are you tired of feeling fun-down and stressed?
Do you want super food benefits without super food price?
Anyway - I think open with questions - but good ones - work on your copy - and then after the questions -
10 in one will and then list the benefits.
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