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Let me know what you think of this site I built

Postby hafool » Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:12 pm

I got paid to put together this website for an Asian customer of mine. I am looking for opinions on how to improve it and if the site is understandable, www.LDUcompany.com is the website address. I would like to hear any feedback. Thanks.
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Postby spicy.girly01 » Thu Sep 18, 2008 1:43 am

Website design is simple and clean. But it is not attractive. Logo is also not a professional one. If you want to make site more attractive you have to totally think something else.
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Postby pinnacle.biz » Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:34 am

Website design is simple and clean. You have to design a new professional looking logo.

But overall site design is poor.
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Postby lisaw » Sun Sep 21, 2008 11:28 am

I completely disagree. The site design is easy to navigate and at first glance looks fine. I don't see any problem with the logo... I think the english could use some improvement - for example, what is "exercises equipt" in the sidebar? Is that exercise equipment?

The site could use some improvements, but it's more related to language than design.

Hope that helps
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Postby jono08 » Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:04 am

Hi

I think you have done a great job on that site, its got a pr4 and great content, i would suggest some more content on the bottom with your exit keyworks, and you will be rocking! reg jon
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Postby painternc » Thu Oct 30, 2008 7:47 pm

How about enlarging and making bold the line under the name of the company? The name of the company does not give a clue to what this is about - so the line under it needs to quickly tell the viewer what this is about.
Then the first sentence of the copy - you could make bullet points:
True wholesale prices
Single samples
Free worldwide shipping
Break up that block of copy - it is too many words to be in a large block - break it up into parts that are simple - and separate the parts so the viewer doesn't feel they have so much to read through.
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Postby mellymom3 » Sat Nov 01, 2008 11:06 am

I found the logo a little plain. Also the words on the main page are small. Not everyone can read print this small. When you want something to stand out more, I would maybe make it a 14pt. It looks more like a 10pt now.
Layout is good. Organized well. Just doesn't shout out to me to buy something NOW!
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Postby kas10900 » Fri Nov 14, 2008 12:11 pm

Nice layout, I think the logo is fine, simple and too the point.
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