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Please review my site.
by pamela » Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:21 am
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by JosephRatliff » Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:29 pm
If this is an actual review you are requesting...and you are not just promoting... 
Then, to start with, your copy on the main page needs to be more informative, more editorial style. You should offer a free/low cost report or other information upfront, rather than selling right away.
The site could use a graphic overhaul, and the navigation on the left hand side could be more descriptive...as that seems to be where you are selling your stuff.
Just a start, I only gave it a quick look at first.
Then, to start with, your copy on the main page needs to be more informative, more editorial style. You should offer a free/low cost report or other information upfront, rather than selling right away.
The site could use a graphic overhaul, and the navigation on the left hand side could be more descriptive...as that seems to be where you are selling your stuff.
Just a start, I only gave it a quick look at first.
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by Mommyland » Mon Feb 25, 2008 11:29 am
I would suggest getting rid of the counter. They arent very accurate and its not information that is adding anything to the site.
I would offer Demos, I Know I would not give money with out being able to see what it is I am buying and how it works. the Why should I buy it.
Also Real descriptions instead of a few bullet points of what is in it, Share why it is I may want this 'site'
I would offer Demos, I Know I would not give money with out being able to see what it is I am buying and how it works. the Why should I buy it.
Also Real descriptions instead of a few bullet points of what is in it, Share why it is I may want this 'site'
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