Would you please review my Zentimental.com squeeze page?

[walker22]

Hi Everyone!

I've been on here for about 18 months and haven't been posting much because I've been working hard at putting together my first joint venture with some big names.

What I would love is to get a review/feedback of my squeeze page at:



The site is live so if you enter anything to opt-in, it will function. So please be aware of that.

What I'm looking for in feedback or a review is:

Is the headline too vague or is it compelling enough given the guests?

Assuming it isn't compelling enough, what would improve things?

Would an audio file of me talking about the series help?
Would photos of the guest speakers help?

Is the description of what each speaker is going to cover specific enough for you?

I appreciate any and all honest feedback I can get. Don't worry about hurting my feelings. But if it doesn't work for you, it would be helpful to know why you think it doesn't work. Just saying it's boring and sucks doesn't point me in a direction to improve it.

Thank you for your time and your feedback. I do appreciate it.

Michael

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[walker22]