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Please Review my site
by ktg2007 » Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:37 am
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by JosephRatliff » Mon Dec 10, 2007 6:06 pm
Your first post to this forum, is a site review, hmmm...
Your site looks clean, but the opening page needs a copy overhaul to gain interest. Step one would be a headline that grabs attention.
Then...from there, cleaner, more readable copy in a little bit larger font.
That's a start any how.
Now, about that expertise you can be sharing...about graphics perhaps?
Your site looks clean, but the opening page needs a copy overhaul to gain interest. Step one would be a headline that grabs attention.
Then...from there, cleaner, more readable copy in a little bit larger font.
That's a start any how.
Now, about that expertise you can be sharing...about graphics perhaps?
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