by jaggiegill » Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:23 pm
Welcome to the SSWT forum James Clark, I hope you have a great time here.
Here are some tips to improve your websites, just like Joseph says , they need some attention and editing, I hope my lists helps you identify some problems.
Sales page:
1. It needs some serious editing!
2. Your sales copy is boring to be honest, give it some spice , hire a copywriter from a freelance website to help you out.
3. Add Proof, show people that you mean business, get some shots of your earnings ,m even for $9 I will not by this product unless I know you mean business, make your sales page more "in your face".
Squeeze Page:
1. You just don't have me sold, I read it and it's just another report, get some images in there and again, show the proof that it works!
Just spice up your information a little more, if you can show others this is a serious product, they will buy it.