Looking For Feedback On My Websites

[Getagrip]

[americanwahm]

Hi Keith,

The page you created is fine, it gives the reader a little info about the different products you recommend.

I wonder if we should know some more about you. Product reviews are only as valued as the reviewer's opinion is valued

[mindy1978]

Hi Keith:

I agree with Kelly. Basically all I see is on the page is your recommendations for products. But I don't know anything about you or who you are to be able to trust your recommendations.

Mindy

[Getagrip]

Thanks for the feedback! One more question...what should I write about to tell people about myself? Where I'm from? What I do for work? Hobbies? Other stuff? Ideally, I would like to write a "online sucess" bio, but I only work online on a part time basis, and have a ways to go before I "arrive". Also, I did have a picture and a small bio at the top of my page for for about a week, but my conversions (the number of people who visited my links) went DOWN...so I removed the bio and the picture.

Thanks again for the feedback!

[Lynn Terry]

I think your headline would read easier if you broke it into two lines with a line break - and perhaps reworded it a bit. Maybe something like:

Money-Making Secrets Exposed!
Learn How To Make Money Online Free

The leading paragraph at the top of the page says the word "I" too many times. You can reword this to answer the readers question of "whats in it for me??" and also give them a hint of what they might expect from you via email besides the free download.

Just some suggestions

[Getagrip]