sales letter draft...part deux...

[Domain Name Guy]

After 9 months and who-knows-how-many frustrating events, I've finally
revamped my potential first sales letter. Click the link below to read it:

http://davezan.com/draft08282005.htm

Some notes:

1. I'm in the process of organizing my other testimonials I recently got. I
will put them in later on.

2. Pardon the lack of audio button, Mike Filsaime's story, and handwritten
MBG. I'll work on those, too.

3. There's one more bonus I'd like to add but as a mystery bonus. I'm not
really sure how I'll add it in, but I'm planning to give it to the next 230
who will order.

4. I'm pondering whether I should put the opt-in form for my free course
as a pop-up or put the opt-in form in the letter anyway. Or should I do the
namesqueeze?

5. Which of the 2 order buttons should I put in? I'm thinking of asking my
friend to create another one wherein it'll say "Click Here To Secure Your
Copy Now" or something to that effect.

Okay, let 'er rip! Don't hold back!

Okay, I'm going off to bed for now. I'll post more next time.

Thanks.