I really need some help with my sales page

[networkmom]

Hello, I am trying to sell my ebook I wrote you can see it here:
http://www.fitnessandkids.com/fitnessandkids-ebook.html
I am doing PPC and get traffic from search engines but I have only sold a few ebooks but none so far with my PPC through google.
I really think I need a much better sales letter but just can not seem to do it. Is there anyone who can give me a hand? I am willing to pay depending on how much the charge is. Also I wonder if I should just have a sales page with no other links on my page kind of like a landing page? Any advice on this would be appreciated, my ebook is a good little ebook on kids fitness and it is I believe a good price so not sure why I am not selling any.

Thanks
Denise

[lawrence]

Hello Denise

Do you know what your current conversion rate currently is? Before spending any money on google if you visitor value is low it may not be worth spending money on the ad copy, although i think it could be better. you can send me an email to lawrence@advent-marketing.com if want and include some facts about what it has done so far what you want it do.

regards

Lawrence

[MikeS]

[KansasDragon]

A couple of things I notice... Not enough "How to".. As a parent I want to know 'How to" accomplish something with my kids, and the words "How to" are very powerful to me.. Example for your headline.. instead of "Fighting Childhood Obesity" something like: "How to Fight Your Child's Obesity, Proven, Tested Methods"


Also, with a topic like this.. I would consider a few free "courses" being offered from the page, just for getting the parent's email address, send them some great tips via email, and in each email tell the Parent how they can have much more information from your book. That will give you several chances to sell your book when someone comes to your page, rather than just one shot.

Good luck..