can i get a critic?

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[BizCardGuru]

Aaron, the biggie is that it's not immediately clear to me what you do.

CustomerManager.com is a good descriptive name... but I don't see how that has anything to do with your headline, "If You Accept Payments Through PayPal, Get Ready For a Profit EXPLOSION!"

And your stop/go "Stop Working Harder!" and "Start Working Smarter!" headlines take up room on prime territory of your website without really telling me anything. I think a statement of what you do (sort of like your mission statement, but more specific and more "you-focused") should go there instead.

ALso, I suggest you make your webpages resizable; (e.g. width="100%" instead of width=900); otherwise your whole page isn't seen on computers with browser resolution set to say 800 x 600.

Nice start!

Diana Ratliff
http://www.bizbooklets.com
Shouldn't your business card work as hard as YOU do?

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