Your comments...

[herdirectsales]

would be greatly appreciated!

I've just completed a new website, http://www.managed-stress.com

I'm wondering if it's worded correctly, what's missing, yadda, yadda.

I'm open to ALL suggestions and my feelings won't be hurt in the least bit!

Fire away!

TIA,

Blessings,
Regina Baker

[livinonline]

[herdirectsales]

Robert,

Your suggestions are great! Thank you for taking the time to answer as well as provide resources!

Time to do some work! You gave me a great sig line

Thank you!

[livinonline]

Whew! I am glad that you liked them (comments)..I was a little worried about offending..I am estatic that I found you a "sig line." Wish you the all the best in your marketing efforts..

Robert..

[herdirectsales]

Changes are done! Any feedback?

Thanks!

[livinonline]

Oh Man..I think that you can knock me over with a feather! This is the first time I ever had anyone take my advice, and actually put it into practice!! You even used your sig line, as your headline!!

Much, Much better..You got "Rid Of The Russians", moved the facts up to the front, quoted some research, stated benefits..Now, all that left is to join Mike Fortin's site, and have some real professionals look at it!!

I am truly flattered..But, remember, and I know that I am repeating myself, but get other opinions as well.. If you convert more sales because of the changes, let us know? Also, if you get other opinions, or change the site again--let me know....

Thanks for everything..
Robert..