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Bullet Points

Postby Bensettle » Wed Aug 06, 2008 2:23 pm

I'm always on the lookout for ads with great bullet points.

Other than the "usual suspects" -- Gary Halbert, John Carlton, Gary Bencivenga, Eugene Schwartz... what other copywriters (whose ads can be found online) give good bullet points... and where can they be found on the Internet?

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Postby Kyle Tully » Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:24 pm

Ben Settle writes killer bullets... but you've probably got most of his ads ;)

(Feel free to send some my way. My Settle swipe file is too small :oops:)

No one else (other than who you mentioned) comes to mind as a great bullet writer...
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Postby Bensettle » Thu Aug 07, 2008 8:40 am

Hey Kyle, you flatter me, dude :D

If you want more, I actually have an ad in the hopper that, so far, has over 120 bullets -- whoa! (Which is one of the reasons I'm looking for more inspiration on the subject.)

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Postby Kyle Tully » Fri Aug 08, 2008 12:20 am

I'd love to take a look at it.

And I'm dead serious, your bullets are awesome. You and Carlton are the only guys I ever look to for bullet inspiration.

Do you get Makepeace's Easy Writers Club newsletter? There's a great issue on writing bullets but I'll be damned if I can find find it... I think there's a good Parris Lampropoulos bullet swipe in there.
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Postby Bensettle » Tue Aug 12, 2008 12:38 am

Hey Kyle,

I look at JC's bullets for inspiration, too :D

I don't get the EWC newsletter, but I have heard some extremely good stuff about it.

Ben

P.S. When the ad is done, I'll send it to ya if you want, any feedback would be extremely appreciated. Especially with the offer, which will either make me a ton of moolah or send me to the poor house...
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Postby JosephRatliff » Tue Aug 12, 2008 10:19 am

Dan Kennedy has written some killer bullets...going through the swipe file now to pull out a few...
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