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Would you say my homepage presells my services? If not, what changes should be made? What advice can you give me?

One of my goals for today is work on getting the site ready for adSense. I think I am mainly going to use this on my individual service pages, and the home page. Wonder if I can use it on my newsletter page? I know I am NOT going to use it on my Business Resources page.


Michelle

Luv,

I think your site looks great!!!

Yes I think it presells, but there are too many bullet points. Also there was no conclusion after all the bullet points.

Take my opinion for what it's worth (sometimes it's not worth anything)

Scott

Thanks Scott

I've made notes to your opinions, and will take that into consideration.

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How odd - for some reason I still cannot bring that site up on my desktop computer! Now thats frustrating I'm sure its on my end somehow - I'll work on figuring that out.

I liked Scott's suggestion from what I remember of the main page, though - at the end, you need a "lead in" to contact you, hire you

I'll get back to you with more info once I'm back on the laptop!

sorry Lynn, didn't mean to cause you any trouble!

I've got that marked on my todo list,, just have been running around since about 1:30, just got home and have to leave back out at 5:30 and then again at 8:30. I'm glad Mondays and Tuesdays are the only days like this. Well, usually anyways. This week seems to be full of dr appts and such for the family! I really can't wait till the girls get their licenses and are driving themselves around! Less trouble on me!

Michelle