Can anyone help with a site review? Thanks!

[oran]

Hi all,

I am about to go live with my first web site and I've got last minute jitters.

I am using the minisite/sales letter model to sell a high ticket physical product, a greenhouse. Do you think it will work?

How about style -- does the "friendly advisor" approach come off as appropriate?

Have I overlooked anything?

Any other comments?

I welcome your feedback. Thanks in advance.

Best wishes,
Oran Kangas

[thenewsiewriter]

[Lynn Terry]

Hi Oran ~ I actually like the colors and the way its written out - even though I'm not greenhouse shopping, I found it an interesting read and followed the links from one phase to the next. I'm curious why you wouldnt put the newsletter sign-up on the main page, though (I'm sure you had a reason for that). I'm assuming the main purpose is to lead them to the 'dealer link' on page two, and to gain subscribers at the same time - correct?

Good job

[oran]

Hi Kelly and Lynn.

Your reviews are appreciated. Based on the reviews I have received from you (and a few others on another forum), I have made many changes. The site will be much better as a result.

Kelly -- I don't have a sample ezine yet. The ezine is my next project.

Lynn --
>I'm curious why you wouldnt put the newsletter sign-up on the main page, ... to lead them to the 'dealer link' on page two, and to gain subscribers at the same time - correct?
You are correct, ma'am. It may not be the best strategy, but it's the one I will try first.

Thanks again.

Best wishes,
Oran Kangas